Nov 12, 2023
You have a knack for writing horror stories. You made me feel like I was in the nightmare with the narrator. Your descriptions were very vivid and realistic, and I could sense the presence of the creature and its evil intentions. The narrator’s resistance and refusal to give in was very heroic and admirable. I wanted to know more about the origin and purpose of the creature and why it needed the narrator’s consent. This was a very captivating and scary story. Fantastic work!